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Feedback 22/03/23

  • Writer: charlie stu
    charlie stu
  • Mar 22, 2023
  • 1 min read

Feedback

You're close,

ambitious,

one more push.


You're dreaming,

clueless,

shooting at the moon.


You're learning,

independent,

these are not the words of God.



 
 
 

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